Print draft feedback and learner response

 

 Final Media Project

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1fv0gcrazI337vClODyDzjhZWFpHyqTAn?usp=sharing

Highlighted are ones I've done

 Front cover:

• Very strong cover – excellent visual style, high-quality images, consistent colour scheme. Lots to credit here!
• I’m a bit unsure what the 22 refers to?

She is asked 22 questions in the interview

• It feels a little light on cover lines perhaps?

 

Double-page spread feature/interview:

 

• Does ‘rising legend’ work? Can a legend rise? Not sure.
• Strong design across the two pages – but the image is very serious. Do you have other images or could the article/headline/subhead reflect the feel of the image?

I don't have any other images

• Look at the layout of questions – it feels like Q1 should be where Q3 is?
• Column width inconsistent – was this created on Photoshop or InDesign

When creating consistent width it looked off

• Written English needs checking in places
• Not sure on the two images bottom right – what are you trying to achieve with those?

 

Tour poster

 

• Am I missing something – is the artist title on there?
• In general, it feels like it is missing a few conventions although the dates and venues look great.
• Could you incorporate the headphone sponsorship in a more creative way?

Not sure how to since I don't have any photos with me wearing the headphones